Since the CRC is being written in parts averaging about four or five paragraphs each, and not always regularly, it's very choppy and . . . well, lets just say editing is a big job. Parts don't flow to the next, the point of veiw bounces around enough to make the mind spin. The crosscutting (jumping from one scene to another and back again) is absurd, and basically, the rough entries are very hard to follow. There's also alot of excess material there that needs to be removed. If you read all the entries then you know what I'm talking about.

So this is the page dedicated to what we have edited so far. Yes, you can actually read the revisions. Aren't you excited now? Unfortunately, we don't have it all edited so if you haven't read the entries, then these won't make sense to you. If you have read them, then this might be interesting to see the changes we made to what we've edited so far. I really like the way this is all coming out.

Okay, that's enough rambling on my part. Here are the edits.

Escape from Venkatagiri - Written and rewritten from Tobee's perspective. Characters include Tobee, Daqyn, Qili, Tinsl and Wymbli. Goes up until they board the Wind Harness.

On the Wind Harness - Almost a complete rewrite. Told from several perspectives. Lots of changes. Characters include Camden, Zarryn, Gamalin, Lera, Tobee, Daqyn, and Qili.

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